TS #5 Kangjin Lee

 6/1/23

Hours: 1

Following our previous session, Kangjin sent me a writing sample summarizing his speech on golf from the session. I went through and highlighted where he made some errors and gave feedback on what he did well. After the session, I emailed him the document with the subsequent edits that were made. A lot of the mistakes he made were minor, like sentence fragments and omitting articles at times.

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